Ok I was bored so whewn I started typing this came out:
Seth hit the ground hard. Falling from the spiritual realm was painful. He got up and looked around. He saw that he was in dak woods except for the moonlight that was scattered among the trees. Seth was tall with sand blond hair and peircing blue eyes...well he did when he was in his human form. Hi dark angel form was much more beautiful. His skin would be glowing and his eyes would e black with red flecks in them and his hair would look almost as if it was shimmering. The Devil appeared before him floating on a black cloud in his back coat and jeans. "There is a girl named Rachel who is going to come here and commit suicide here, or atleast try to. Make her do it!" He ordered. "Ok" Seth said. "If you do well you may have the girl but if you fail you are going back to transporation." Transporation was something only the lowest dark angels did. Their job was to drag unwilling souls down to hell. Seth was put on transportation duty because he accidently helped someone convert to Christianity. At the time he had just fallen and didn't know what to do. He learned a lot since then and now Satan was giveing him a chance to prove himself. Demons had more fun because they got to do possesions and tempt people. Seth wanted nothing more than to become a demon instead of a wimpy dark angel. "I promise i won't mess this up" Seth said confidently. "Good. Just wait here for her to come. I pulled back all the demons so you have space to work. Rachel should be here soon." Satan said as he dissapeared into a back fog. Seth always thaught the master was a bit dramatic at times. He waited and sure enough he felt pain. Seth loved pain. A humans pain was like candy for demons and dark angels. It gave them strength. He saw a small girl walking thrugh the woods with her coat tightly wrapped around her. She had red hair that came to her shoulder and big green eyes. She wasn't skinny but she wasn't fat either. He let himself be pulled to her pain and that's when he saw the angel. The angel was a bit shorter than Seth with shaggy jet black hair and brown eyes. The angel was rapidly texting on a phone as he walked. the angel glanced at Rachel and knew the fight wasn't over he would need some help. Seth was a bit confused as to why he was texting but he took the oppertunity to start wispering to her. "You are nothing. No one cares about you" When a demon, dark angel, or angel whisperes to a human they can put ideas in their heads or make them feel certain things but the human can choose to let them in or block them out. When the angel was don texting Seth looked at him an said "Who are you?" "Andrew" the angel snapped "now get away from her!" Seth gave Andrew a cruel smile and said "She's mine" "No! She's God's child!" "Not for long." Seth said coolly. Andrew just glared at him then turned his attention back to Rachel. She was crying as she pulled a knife from her coat pocket. "There's another way" Andrew whispered but she rejected him again. "Everyone hates you! You're worthless Once you're dead they won't care!" Seth whispered. Rachel cried harder and positioned the knife over a big vein in her wrist but then Andrew whispered "Think of your pa-" Seth cut him off and whispered harshly "Go ahead and do it already!" Rachel started to cut when she heard a voice callling her name. "Do it now!" Seth shouted "Think of how they will feel when they see your body lying here in the woods." "Rachel!" The voice was getting closer. Andrew shoved Seth and whispered "That is the voice of someone who loves you very much, listen to them." She slowly put down the knife and started to go twards the voice. Seth was really angry now. "If you go back now nothing will change! You will go back right to where you started!" He yelled. Rachel sank to her knees and buried her face in her hands. Then Seth saw another girl come in to view. She was about the same height as Rachel with short wavy blond hair and grey eyes. The girl saw Rachel on the ground and went to her. She knelt besde her and said "Rachel, are you ok?" Seth saw that she had an angel with her. The angel looked at Andrew and said "Sorry I couldn't get bak to you sooner, you know how slow cars are." The angel said. "Thanks Jake." Andrew said. Andrew gave Seth a cocky smile and turne to the girls. The girl put her arm around Rachel and hugged her. "Amy?" Rachel said "Yeah?" The other girl said. "What are you doing here?" Rachel sobbed. "I came to talk to you. Your mom said you went for a walk in the woods so I came back here to find you. I know you have been haveing a hard time lately and I wanted to come and see if you are ok. I also braught this." Amy said pulling out a bible. Seth was furious. He had no power against the bible unless she didn't beileve it. Seth screamed profanities at them as Amy began to read "'For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only son to die for us so that whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life.' John 3:16. God loves you so much that he gave his son for you." She said "You are his daughter and he is your father. He is the perfecrt father." Amy looked on the ground and noticed the knife. She looked at Rachel in disbelief. "Rachel, were you going to..." Rachel nodded. Amy grabbed the knife and threw it as far as she could just to get it away from Rachel. "You do not need to do that. There are people who love you so much. I think you should come to church with me on Sunday. I also think we should tell your parents." Amy hugged Rachel and Seth staggered back a few steps because he felt Amy's love for Rachel and it hurt him. "You are loved" The angels whispered to both of the girls. That did it. Seth felt the pull of hell as the the world seemed to melt around him. He looked around and saw that he was by theburning gates of hell. He was back to transportaion.
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