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RE: Share what you've written - 11/25/2005 11:25:37 PM
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ST8k-dinR
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heres a poem guitarman
i saw some flowers and i picked up a rose
the next thing i knew it bit off my nose
so i caught it in a jar
then all of a sudden it highjacked my car
then i realized it wasnt a flower
it was an alian with unusual.
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RE: Share what you've written - 11/26/2005 12:16:06 AM
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Sirach
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ORIGINAL: Kway88
heres a poem guitarman
i saw some flowers and i picked up a rose
the next thing i knew it bit off my nose
so i caught it in a jar
then all of a sudden it highjacked my car
then i realized it wasnt a flower
it was an alian with unusual.
LOL I like that one! ^__^ It's been a long time since I've been on the forums since school has been making me busy...
Here's a poem that I had made during the time being; I may visit now and then though. And greenish, your poems are wonderful because they open your heart (especially being contradictory in the self like the last one you posted)... thank you for that :).
My poems suck at the moment, but here's one...
Fear
I sat upon the beach one night
And slowly, closed my eyes
To feel that ardent, silver light
Beneath the starry skies.
And though the air was crisp and clear
It whispered this to me:
"My little child, there be no fear,
So let it part from thee."
"What doth this mean?" I said, confused
That fear does not exist.
That whisper left her breath, infused
Upon the ocean mist.
And looking at the moonlit sea,
The mist had disappeared
And all that left a track was me,
The little child who feared.
I know that whisper in the breeze,
That silent prose above,
Which always kept reminding me
To live my life in love.
And though my sorrow takes each tear
And drips into the sea,
I know in truth, there is no fear,
And that shall set me free.
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RE: Share what you've written - 11/28/2005 1:34:12 AM
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Purity88
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*bump* hee hee yes I love this thread.
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RE: Share what you've written - 11/28/2005 1:58:22 PM
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whisper
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I recently scribbled this down on a sheet of paper during a medical microbiology lecture:
Looking at the shadows on the wall
of things that are happening behind me
in times past
in corners of my hurting mind
there is a man.
He says to me
"let's go for a drive
let's talk a while."
He doesn't normally make time for me
not at this hour
not on a Tuesday
and so I am so pleased that he does
and we go
and it ends-
and what was so special
became what was feared
became what was painful.
I should know now
not to be too eager
to open my heart;
he took time out for me
to take me out
to take me out of his life.
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RE: Share what you've written - 11/28/2005 3:35:04 PM
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Konstantinos
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hmm how come there are only like three guys that have ever posted poetry on here and like 100 girls? LOL thats very interesting (in Jack Sparrow voice)
For me,
mainly cause I don't like poems. And my poems wouldn't be good at all anyway in greek. Lol let alone in english they wouldn't make sense.
But I prefer something that actually makes sense and I understand rather than talking in riddles, whether they are beautiful or not...
For others, cause there aren't any other guys lefT!!!! LOLOL
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RE: Share what you've written - 11/30/2005 8:54:57 PM
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Talia
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You guys are such amazing writers. I've read all, and they are truly expressions coming from the heart and soul of those who have written them.
I'm very impressed, but yeah I expected to be lol.
ok soo I'm posting one, just because..........
Going through a passing phase
In a crazy age
If only life could be simple
Grasping at hopeless things
Trying on new skins
Wanting to fit in every circle
Deciphered dreams
run into reality
Nothing is really certain
Playing hide and seek
trying to be meek
turning inside out
hoping to find me
In the midst of it all
comes a call
vision is found
truth shines true
Purpose is found in you.
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To see the world in a grain of sand, and a heaven in a wild flower, Holds infinity in the palm of your hand, and eternity in an hour. - William Blake
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RE: Share what you've written - 12/1/2005 12:15:56 AM
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Purity88
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Once filled with the richest music,
I stand forgotten and still
In a quiet room, dark and calm,
Where no footsteps still echo
Some might just call me furniture,
A trophy, a prop, a toy.
I long for one to care for me
but most of all to play me.
I remember the subtle warmth
of fingers, flying o'er my keys.
I recall being grand and proud,
All iv'ry and varnished wood.
Once polished, brilliant, revered
I stand alone and shrouded
With a pale and dusty sheet
As one who has breathed his last.
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RE: Share what you've written - 12/1/2005 12:59:12 AM
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ShutterBox
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((purity changed her name?!?!?! *GASP!* wow...lol I like it!))
the clock takes me paste very hour
the time is going to fast where does it go?
I find myself awake every first hour of the morning
I can't sleep
then the sun rises, and i can't get up
a mess i am/1
oh why can't the clock go slower?
((my feelings right now lol......I g2g to bed......sure and do what till2 am? certianly not sleep.......oi yoi yoi....))
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RE: Share what you've written - 12/1/2005 6:55:15 PM
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Purity88
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lol yu'ns can still call me purity or better yet just Kay. I found that my previous handle, _Purity_, attracted a lot of pm spam because it's on the first page on the member list (or at least, that's our hypothesis). So this is just an experiment to see if the spam prob gets better and thus the kinda weird name...
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RE: Share what you've written - 12/1/2005 10:05:24 PM
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Talia
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Thanks guys.
Purity (I've always loved that sn, the new one is cool too), your poem roxs, I really liked it.
Ash I can really identify because I felt that way too many times.LOL
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To see the world in a grain of sand, and a heaven in a wild flower, Holds infinity in the palm of your hand, and eternity in an hour. - William Blake
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RE: Share what you've written - 12/5/2005 12:03:19 PM
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notsuccinct
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this poem is kind of the composite of my experiences when close guy friends get girlfriends. I know it sounds kind of bitter, but it's not terribly... just honest.
replaced
you really really like her
so I'm happy for you.
it's all very, very nice.
and I know you mean for things to be the same
but they aren't.
and I doubt she'd like it
if they were.
(what girl wants her boyfriend
over at the house of
talking on the phone to
going to see movies with
another girl?)
so don't worry about me;
enjoy this romance.
I am used to being
replaced.
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RE: Share what you've written - 12/5/2005 12:59:23 PM
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Konstantinos
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lol I got confused in the middle. though I know what you mean by being left out when friends get boyfriends/girlfriends.
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RE: Share what you've written - 12/5/2005 6:59:28 PM
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whisper
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I also know that feeling well, and am more acquainted with it again being recently unattached...
My latest scribble. Not a poem, just thoughts
trusting, walking in obedience
forgiving and hoping
being vulnerable
....waiting
this is the cost of being free
And this is either a really really short poem or just some more thoughts:
First Love
I hope ten years from now
I will hear your children's names
in passing from a friend of a friend-
you will always be my first love
And this is about my little brother. . . I love him but he worries me
Joey*
It keeps my mind occupied and sometimes that feels like enough
A keyboard beneath my fingers and some blinking lights and sounds
there's a world out there, but since they are okay
with letting me sit isolated in my basement
then I'm okay with locking myself in
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RE: Share what you've written - 12/8/2005 11:36:46 AM
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notsuccinct
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hehe... I've been trying my hand at haiku. results are marignal.
finally honest a relief and yet a loss time will answer me. --- desperate to write good and suitable haiku I try, but it stinks. 
and here's a real poem...
if I could only
capture you with words
praise your many traits
recite what it is about you
that I so dearly love.
but how does one write
of such unfulfilled potential?
such greviously neglected hope
all in you that promises so much more...
I love you now
for what you are; still
I would rejoice so greatly
in what you could be.
actually, that one I just wrote and I'm not sure. I may have to change it some. but the idea's there.
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RE: Share what you've written - 12/8/2005 1:44:09 PM
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whisper
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Well- leave it for a while before you change it and give yourself a chance to love it. I actually think it's a very strong poem. I like it a lot!
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